B017SJHZI0 a233BVQQ1SEZ4F 459 Note: 2015-11-17 Edit
B017SJHZI0 a1BPW2NLU41JWI 4823 Note: Wouldn't it be briefing? De comes after. Edit
B017SJHZI0 a1VZKENK4I94MU 5184 Note: Repeated from last paragraph. Intentional? Edit
B017SJHZI0 a336ZQVBMX7F5C 15270 Note: Verb tense weirdness. Edit
B017SJHZI0 a1OC8M8RJ4R9ZT 27480 Note: was wielding, or -was Edit
B017SJHZI0 a1WQEH9MVBO4HZ 38305 Note: Seems he and Seahorse would have the same amount of Muerta genetics, unless Julio III's mother was a close relative of Julio Junior. But maybe this is just not something he'd understand (or admit). Edit
B017SJHZI0 a2J97LHRXJ3B0G 39431 Note: reflecting Edit
B017SJHZI0 a1E817L3C4HK0J 106004 Note: in -> it Edit
B017SJHZI0 a2BFUTSRTIMFVE 168160 Note: wanted Edit
B017SJHZI0 a2WFK7799HA910 186566 Note: Maybe? Hard to be sure about proper plurals and possessives with a fictional word. Edit
B017SJHZI0 a39KNRFZURD0DI 189321 Note: Haha, I know the author is a Haruka fan. Edit
B017SJHZI0 a3207M41XNXY6R 190778 Note: Meaning of parley is closer, but possibly intentional. Edit
B017SJHZI0 a2G9FSD9POHO35 299360 Note: breaths Edit
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B017SJHZI0 a1R19S9G6HKKP8 345580 Note: 2015-11-19 Edit